Your Openings

Your opening line decides whether anyone hears the rest of your story. Post yours here and get feedback from other readers and from us. Read a few of the openings below before you post — you’ll spot patterns faster from other people’s attempts than from your own. Include a sentence or two of context: who’s the audience, and what’s the story doing? You’ll need a free community account to post an opening or reply to someone else’s. Reading is open to everyone. Sign in or create your account below.

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Post the opening to your story as a new topic in our forum, and comment on the openings of others. We will also pop in here periodically and post story openings we've encountered (and what we thought about them), and comment on your openings. We look forward to seeing your great work.


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